I really like how Brian Doyle wrote this article and included many facts through out it. In this article he uses many facts that he has found within research of humming birds. He doesn’t always credit where he got his information from but the times he does it is very supporting to his topic. Brian does a good job with combining research and detail into an article where it feels like you are not just reading facts. This article almost reads like a story and flows very well. I hope to use this technique while writing my final paper so I can keep the reader interested through out the article.